Rain ....fell down...........
with raging thunderstorms..............
depicting the thoughts in my head.........
My my mind.............
is like troubled waters..............
constantly.....playing...
an orchestra......of mixed feelings.............
Feelings of DESPAIR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
For..........
......until............
the day the lamp expires...............
and tears....of sunset extinguish.the fire.
When....love has fled...........
and left me lone.............
till then.....
i'll be the one.....................
.....who walks............alone.....................
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I respect your unconditional love for the animals.
You truly are a misfit in this world (read compliment)..
I walk alone because I chose the path of solitude... not because it (solitude) fascinates me, but because no one else wants (read dares) to chose that path.. Still , the whole idea does not deter me. Infact it inspires me, for I see what other fail to see..
My notion of solace is struggle
You walk alone because.....
Q - "were u truly in love when u wrote tis piece.....or were u in love with love itself???????????? "
Ans - I cant say. When a memory becomes more valuable than life, words seem tasteless to describe it. I fell in love with her smile more than her..
'fallin in love with love' - I admire your play of words. YES, the feelin (of love) is so refreshing and invigorating that you can fall in love with it (the feeling)
You are utmost welcome to critique my other creations... (someone should !)
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